Akai no setsujoku Manga

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mysterious stubborn and strong
that was confusing

you just didn't say anything and don't critisize, it's just ideas, i don,t see you putting some ideas

it's rare for me to have an idea for something to draw, just give me some stuff about the personnality, it was just some simple ideas, ok? So stop acting like that and give some ideas so i can draw O_o....lol

did I criticize
anyway you want ideas: he shouldnt be too young thats for sure, hes in the army after all..
Lets make a character different from other main characters , so no " KImi MAmoru !'' plz.
I suggest we put the character in the flying division so he needs flying equipment.
ummm If you have an Idea for the character design, why do you need his personality

well that's what you said? ok well i'll try something without the flying equipement, one step at the time. when i will decide to begin, it's always the beginning that's hard for me, lol.

well i don't care what you guys decide for his personnality but i think uncivilised is something to consider, lol, it's gonna bring the facet of humour to this.

Personality is always what makes a character an interesting one, even if it is well drew.
Well flying division is good but still, we need to find some traits for the personality 'cause it's with that that we're gonna be inspired and influenced to draw the char.
BUT if you have any ideas for the char already, just post it and we could find an interesting personality that would fit with it and with the kind of story we want.
Sounds good?

yeah
uncivilized is good( hes a failed experiment after all) but at the same time he should have a very logical sense of thinking, as he was supposed to be a top notch soldier

Alright so Camilon and I will start making some concepts. In the meantime what about the lead female role?

I just have a question, if he's a prototype that's supposed to be dead, why is he in the army?

Oh and i'll try to put my idea when i'll finish it, i should maybe start it soon.

Well we didn't really get the opinion of everybody about the main char that should be a girl or a boy... but what about a girl for the main and a boy for the expriment/secondary character?

Bw, I have an idea for the girl and I'll work on that as soon as possible. She's supposed to be in the flying division right?

I guess everybody is ok with what we said earlier about the sexe of the characters. Go on welley draw!

here's a quick draw of my idea, i've lost some of it but it's alright. It's really ugly but it just to show you my ideas.



well as you can see in the top right corner, i did i little symbol. I thought like he could go like in "prototype form" when he attacks and his body has some little modification when in this form. Like the eye could turn to this symbol that could be the symbol from the organisation who did the prototypes. His hand could ressemble a claw-like figure like that little ugly thing in the bottom left corner. Maybe other modifications, if you guys like it?

And for his "suit", he could have long sleeves, i think that this gives him like the appearence of agility(lol, that's how I see it, so he could be agile)He could maybe have a hood( just something little that came up, I don't really see the meaning of this so...) and the rest well let's find something. So is this all ok?

*Plz, no commentary on my super drawing, lol, i know it's bad. I didn't put any effort into it. ^_^

well for the prototype guy the eyes could be nice but he should always have them. Oh and of course he wouldnt be in the army at the beginning of the story, He could get involved in the armys conflict somehow and then join.
Personality and design ideas:
-dark blue, semi-long hair
-Uncivilized could be good
-excellent and serious with combat
for the main girl:
-Even if shes in the army, she wouldnt be the best soldier
-could be the generals daughter maybe
-J-pop fan
-Blond hair
..
Oh wait...are those 2 characters gonna be aang and welly or not

what do you guys mean by being us? and what about his outfit, is it ok?

If I understand what reven said , you who ''be'' the main guy, so you would like make his decisions and stuff, like if he was you, same for welley.
his outfit well im not too sure what he should wear on casual days but this seems ok
If theres a school, he would wear the uniform anyway

The outfit should be fine. I'll see what I can do about that claw though.. Is it made out of his own flesh? Also is that his main weapon or is there another?

Basically I want to come up with the concepts and then we could start making dialogue between one another (playing a role). Between drawing and school I stay very busy.although there is no issue coming up with concepts, working on two mangas at the same time would stretch me.

So just keep me updated on the desired look of this guy and I should have it up in no time.

The claw is made of his flesh, but i don't know what weapon as a prototype he should have, i would like him to have something else.

Ok, i don't mind being the guy prototype.

LOL well I don't mind being the girl neither, haha, could be fun
Also for the design of the girl, I already started something... and I don't really like the "blond" idea, too classic. I had an idea more of long dark-purple hair with a modern cut (well you'll see, if only I could finish my draw... lol) She would wear a special suit from the flying division and has the helmet that'd fit
Anyway! I'm working hard on that now

yeah I though about that color too but the guy would also have that color( wel dark-blue not purple..), and the toy I showed also had purple-blueish hair so I thought I should make something else.. anyway this calls for a vote: what color should the main characters hair be

Green, green. I don't know, green like C.C. would be kind of cool.

so we got green, purple and blond.. what about you reven

This guy is moody so I'd say black or red, this is Aang's character so don't mind me though.

red? yeah for the guy that'd be great but what about the girl?

I say purple. Purple!! :p Honestly, I don't really mind, haha.

Will somebody decide already. So we can continue

ok go for purple
and for the guy, im voting red
is that ok?

I agree for the red. So let's try that! haha